I like your clear and concise introduction Oliver. You outline very clearly what information is to follow. Did you use multiple texts and sites to gather your information? Are there any areas you would add more content to if you were to rework you information report?
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I like your clear and concise introduction Oliver. You outline very clearly what information is to follow. Did you use multiple texts and sites to gather your information? Are there any areas you would add more content to if you were to rework you information report?
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