Hi Oliver, Great effort on your Create task about brown bears. You set out the information in a clear way and chose 10 facts that were very interesting. I saw some brown bears at a zoo in Korea - the bears were sitting down and I could see their feet. So cute! Remember to write a description about the task you were doing. Here, you have merely put up a slideshow about brown bears. What were the other animals you could have chosen from and why did you choose this animal? Have you seen one in real life? Why do you think people choose to have a teddy bear as a toy? Are bears known to be soft and cuddly or wild and ferocious? I hope to read a great intro into your blog post next time. Keep up your good work!
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Hi Oliver,
ReplyDeleteGreat effort on your Create task about brown bears. You set out the information in a clear way and chose 10 facts that were very interesting. I saw some brown bears at a zoo in Korea - the bears were sitting down and I could see their feet. So cute!
Remember to write a description about the task you were doing. Here, you have merely put up a slideshow about brown bears. What were the other animals you could have chosen from and why did you choose this animal? Have you seen one in real life? Why do you think people choose to have a teddy bear as a toy? Are bears known to be soft and cuddly or wild and ferocious?
I hope to read a great intro into your blog post next time. Keep up your good work!