In this writing piece we had to choose from four pictures. I chose a huge steampunk castle on top of a large mountain. I chose it because it looked cool and I had a great idea in my head about a description on it and where I could fit my monster (check it out if you have not seen it already) in it. Then we collaborated (with who?) and wrote five paragraphs on our five senses about what we could see, hear, smell, feel(touch) and feel(emotions). Then we introduced our monsters into three more paragraphs and after those three paragraphs we branched off and took different paths. Once we finished we converted our writing onto a slide. And here we are. It's not quite finished yet though we will update it.
hi oliver makaire here,your pick a path is really cool i liked your descriptive language that you used. But mabye next time you could use some diffrent sentence starters because you use the word there too much EG- there is a loud swaing groaming tree and theres a....
ReplyDeleteover all nice job but how did you learn all this descriptiven language from.
Hi Oliver
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing such a detailed description about your post. It really set the scene for me to understand why you choose the picture prompt that you. You are a very clever creative writer who really builds the story up and captures the readers imagination as well.
What is your own next goal to improve your writing?