Pages

Tuesday, July 30, 2019

persuasive writing

1 comment:

  1. hi Oliver its Peter here and he is saying that he really likes what you have done here.
    but next time you finish your first paragraph maybe think about putting a full stop and then the rest is great and i am TOTALLY on your side now that I have read your story. I also thought that as well that animals should get rewarded for doing good things for humans GOOD JOB

    ReplyDelete

To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post!

Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.