hi Oliver its Peter here and he is saying that he really likes what you have done here. but next time you finish your first paragraph maybe think about putting a full stop and then the rest is great and i am TOTALLY on your side now that I have read your story. I also thought that as well that animals should get rewarded for doing good things for humans GOOD JOB
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hi Oliver its Peter here and he is saying that he really likes what you have done here.
ReplyDeletebut next time you finish your first paragraph maybe think about putting a full stop and then the rest is great and i am TOTALLY on your side now that I have read your story. I also thought that as well that animals should get rewarded for doing good things for humans GOOD JOB